Feedback on your Learning Conference

I loved your story Jessica! Your writer's voice is really strong and you are using speech and reading with expression. Your maths strength is definitely in your strategies and setting a goal for developing your number knowledge is a great choice of future goal.

Tino pai to mahi - keep up the great work.

Feedback from Rob

Dear Jessica, thank you for sharing how your learning is going with me. It’s great to see how you know your writing is improving and that the quality of your work is improved. You are starting to use speech in your writing and a next step from what I can see is for you to start editing yourself.

Your reading has improved and this is shown in increased confidence. It’s great to hear how you are writing at home for fun! Well done.

Haiku

SPRING

BLOSSOMS BLOOMING PINK.

BABY ANIMALS PLAYING.

NEW LEAVES ON THE TREE.

WINTER

HOT CHOCOLATE YUM.

SNOWFLAKES FALL ON THE GROUND.

SNOWMEN DRIPPING DOWN.

SUMMER

BEES BUZZING BY US.

FLOWES ARE PRETTY AND NICS.

THE BLUE SKY IS BRIGHT.

AUTUMN

LEAVES DIE ON THE GRAND

LEAVES ARE FALLING DOWN SOFTLY.

THE LEAVES ARE FALLING

All About Me

JESSICA
Fast, good reader funny loving.
Sister of Kaleb.
Lover of pets.
Who feels happy at the pool.
Who needs my mum and dad
Who gives friendship.
Who fears the lions.
Resident of Rolleston.
WHITELAW